Wednesday 31 August 2016

Deborah Fleming: Ohio Autumn



Cacophonous flock
above harvest field
spreading their sky-net

sideways falls and soars
medusoid in the pulsing
light of afternoon

under bundled clouds
neither to feed nor mate
before migration.


Published 2010. Almost, if not technically, a triple haiku: the less-is-more principle brought off to perfection, as the departing flock soars away from the hint of anthropomorphism in the last stanza.

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